Wednesday, February 11, 2015

25 Edge Hill Poets: Cliff Yates

Boat


1. Boat

In the morning she found a boat marooned on her pillow      

                                    
she couldn’t hear the survivors       
she couldn’t hear the sea.


The boat on the back of her hand, the size of a shell, and light.
 

She glimpsed it again through a window at work
holding up the traffic on the by-pass.

 
She could barely hear the typewriters
for the noise of the storm
in her head…

                    more land than sea
birds and more birds, a crow
on the topmost roof, the door onto the balcony…

 
The cloud-sized boat capsized in the evening sky
the wide open sky, everything piled beneath it.

 

She rocked and she rocked asleep and awake
                  to the crashing of waves.

 
2.  Foot

In the boat near her foot, a young man
in pyjamas with a voice
like Edgar Allen Poe.

 

A man who looked like an overcoat
with a pale face and a wide hat,
                                                  her foot
with the toe and the scars
orange and white like a Penguin.

 
Less blemishes than art, less art...
like preparing a meal –
breaded mushrooms and garlic.

You can't do anything about this
she decided but did nothing anyway
and waited for the inevitable:
                                                       the storm
over Nantucket, Martha's Vineyard,
climbing the rigging...

See – she knew all the words
they were in her blood, swimming around.

 
3. West

He stirs, shakes his head
it rattles

like a bucket of snails
found in the lettuce after a night of rain.

A bucket like the bucket on deck
slopping now

 as he shakes his head
                                      sailing for Rapallo
where Pound fed meat to the mythical cat            


                                      sailing for Europe
a raven in the cage swinging from the masthead.

 

'Boat' was part of an online collaboration with Eleni Sikelianos, commissioned by the editors of Likestarlings. This revised version apears in my pamphlet Bike, Rain (Knives, Forks and Spoons, 2013) and Selected Poems (ebook; Smith/Doorstop, 2014).

I embarked on a PhD in Poetry and Poetics at Edge Hill in 2001. Two years previously, I had published my first full-length collection, Henry's Clock (Smith/Doorstop) and the handbook commissioned by the Poetry Society, Jumpstart Poetry in the Secondary School. I was a member of the Poetry and Poetics Reseach Group at Edge Hill, which was stimulating me to clarify my poetics, and the PhD seemed the logical next step. Completed in 2006, my PhD thesis consists of a collection of poems which subsequently formed the basis of Frank Freeman's Dancing School (Salt, 2009), a critical study entitled ‘The Poem of Process: Frank O’Hara and Tom Raworth’; and 'Flying: A Poetics'. A revised, trimmed-down version of 'Flying' was subsequently published in Troubles Swapped for Something Fresh: Manifestos and Unmanifestos, edited by Rupert Loydell (Salt, 2009). Here is an extract from the opening:

 
Flying: A Poetics

It is useful to distinguish between two approaches to writing. The first is to write about a particular subject, to record, explore, analyse or express it. The second is to write in such a way that the poem itself is the experience, or the subject. It is the second approach that I am concerned with here.

‘In writing, it is not a matter of a certain material which is there, as a fixed thing, upon which the writing feeds and works. The act of writing also serves to nourish the material. When we speak of something, we affect it. It isn’t quite the same. As we cannot altogether ‘will’ what we would say’ (Turnbull, 1962: 27).

The process is improvisatory: to write without a set idea of where the poem is heading. As if the poem has a life, or energy, of its own.

‘I just get hung on the energy. Like the way the energy goes through it’ (Raworth, 1972: 12).

The poem attracts material to itself. Or, to put it another way, during writing, material finds its way in. The poem is the important thing at this stage and the language of the poem, whatever is going on in the environment, whatever thoughts occur during the writing (including memories) can dictate the direction. 

Any experience prior to the writing of the poem is ultimately irrelevant to the poem, though the poem can ‘contain’ or allude to dozens of experiences.

A poem does not have to depend on the idea or experience which may have given rise to it; the idea or experience can ‘merely’ be the starting point.

‘The poem is more than the poet’s intention. The poet does not write what he knows but what he does not know…. Words are ambiguous…. The poem is not a handing out of the same packet to everyone, as it is not a thrown-down heap of words for us to choose the bonniest. The poem is the replying chord to the reader. It is the reader’s involuntary reply’ (Graham, 1946: 380-381).

A poem does not have to ‘say’ anything.

‘I // have nothing to say and I am saying it / and that is poetry’ (Cage, 1961: 183).

 

 

Links

My website/blog: www.cliffyates.co.uk


 Selected Poems ebook:

 
Collaboration with Eleni Sikelianos:


Other poems online:







Cliff Yates is a freelance poet, writer and teacher. His latest collection is Selected Poems (ebook; Smith/Doorstop). He is a tutor for the Arvon Foundation and is currently Royal Literary Fund Fellow at Aston University. www.cliffyates.co.uk

He was previously introduced to Pages readers here: http://robertsheppard.blogspot.co.uk/2009/10/introducing-cliff-yates.html

(He has a review of my The Poetry of Saying here: https://cliffyates.wordpress.com/other-writing/the-poetry-of-saying/)

Expressions of interest in poetry and poetics PhDs may be made to Robert Sheppard at shepparr@edgehill.ac.uk

Friday, February 06, 2015

25 Edge Hill Poets: Christine Riaz

Christine Riaz



Martins Bank Building


As I walk up Water Street

The wind blows off the river

A paradox: that to move forward in space and time

I must cast my mind

Back.

 
From where I stand outside Martins Bank

Doors carved in bronze verdigris

I picture you finishing for the day:

exit only from the right, down the steps.

Or, did you use the other door out

onto Exchange Flags

where the brass letterbox

has one hinge broken?

 

The pavement that surrounds this building

is a palimpsest.

I would willingly kneel here -

scratch this surface for the tiniest trace.

 


 

Thursday, February 05, 2015

Patricia Farrell and Robert Sheppard: FANDANGO LOOPS now out

This text is in partly a ‘reading’ of Siteless by François Blanciak (Cambridge, Mass: MIT Press, 2008), an inventory of 1001 design forms (though he thinks of them as purely architectural ones). I have made use of his section ‘Copenhagen’, but only a few of the words are his. The arrangement of his named shapes (mainly adjective-noun phrases, e.g. ‘plunger façades’) already resembles a poem, as Blanciak is aware, but peculiarly suggest the verses of Raymond Queneau’s ‘quennet’ frame, which I have used here in crumpled form. Blanciak writes that sometimes the words for his forms come to him before the shapes of the free-hand drawings that accompany them. But Patricia Farrell had different ideas and provided her own computer-generated images for the project. It is as the subtitle says, a book of forms.



                                                pastoral zoning                                   
                                                fruiting oval

                                                bloom cube                 
                                                inverted spires

                                                bungled louvers                      
                                                woven dome


                                                miraculous you love it
                                                without comfort not sat in
                                                3 stylish chairs photographed
                                                inside the inside choice of
                                                adjusting the handlebars
                                                frosted glass developed need
                                                designed down to the last plug


                                                circulation worms                   
                                                sinus dragon

Fandango Loops by Patricia Farrell and Robert Sheppard is now out from Ship of Fools, 78 Nicander Road, Liverpool, L18 1HZ, made out to R. Sheppard, for £3. Or email sheppard3@supanet.com

Buy with Liverpool Hugs and Kisses - £5 for both. See here.http://robertsheppard.blogspot.co.uk/2015/01/robert-hampson-and-robert-sheppard.html

Copenhagen Style (not an image from the booklet, though this design museum influenced it, everything 'designed down the last plug' as I say in the poem)

See Patricia's other collaboration with Joanne Ashcroft here.

Visit the hub post to take you to all the posts concerning a Ship of Fools exhibition here

Wednesday, February 04, 2015

Robert Sheppard on Harvey Hix' Progressive Poetics blog: the 200 word 'The Formal Splinter'


 
Read my 200 word version of The Formal Splinter here, as part of Harvey's ongoing (daily!) poetics blog posting Inquire (here).

Read my longer version of it here. And another on form, forms and forming here. And a link to the links to all the posts about form here.

Sunday, February 01, 2015

Robert Sheppard: Poems in Otoliths 36 and Unfinish forthcoming (plus old set list)

Today, I have some prose work published in Otoliths (see here for issue 36 of this e-magazine, and here for my page). My three pieces are from a manuscript called Unfinish: ‘Venus and Adonis’, ‘Interlude’, and ‘Excitation for Jo Blowers’.
Jo performing this piece at (up the side of actually) The Bluecoat

(Set list: ‘Excitation for Jo Blowers’ was first performed, in a performance text version, as a work-in-progress, at the Friends of cris cheek evening at the Bluecoat, Liverpool, 25th June 2013 by Jo Blowers and Mary Prestidge (dance), and Robert Sheppard and Patricia Farrell (voice). (See here for a later performance with Jo of a subsequent collaboration.) It was led by Jo Blowers. In the performance version it is possible to use the original sentences/lines of part two – they nearly all began, ‘The poem is like…’ – in any order. It is not possible to use them in no order. It is possible to use all of them or only one. Or to carry on re-using them without end. They have been per-formed into a page version for this showing to enable the performance of reading to be enacted more engagingly by a silent reader. The empty parentheses are to be filled by the reader(s), performer(s) or listeners, or accepted as unfinish.)

I say ‘manuscript’, but Unfinish is published by Veer and may be read about and obtained here.

Other published parts of Unfinish include ‘In Unadopted Space’, which was first published in the anthology Sculpted: Poetry of the North West, edited by Lindsey Holland and Angela Topping, Aughton: North West Poets, 2013; ‘Portrait and Portals’ was published, with images by Patricia Farrell, on the online part of the anthology The Dark Would, edited by Phil Davenport, Manchester: Apple Pie Editions, 2013. The piece I wrote for/to Sean Bonney, 'Bad Poems for Bad People' (whose earlier version may be read here) starts the whole thing off, but there has been a de-selection: ‘Sudley House’ has been pulled from the collection, but it may still be read here (another text that is a page-based version of a performance text; there's a link to that).

The rest is unpublished and shall remain a surprise.

 In this, the southern summer, 2015, issue of Otoliths you’ll also find exciting new work by:

Volodymyr Bilyk, George McKim, Lakey Comess, Stephen Bett, Greg McLaren, Philip Byron Oakes, Demosthenes Agrafiotis, Robert Lietz, Stephen C. Middleton, Nick Ravo, Chase Gagnon, Owen Bullock, Caleb Puckett, Kyle Hemmings, Despo Magoni, Craig Cotter, J. Crouse, Michael Martrich, Bryan Young, Halvard Johnson, dan raphael, Jeff Dahlgren, Jeff Dahlgren and John Lowther, John Lowther, Pete Spence, Howie Good, A. J. Huffman, John M. Bennett, Jim Leftwich and John M. Bennett, John M. Bennett and Vittore Baroni, Thomas M. Cassidy and John M. Bennett, Thomas M. Cassidy and Cheryl Penn and John M. Bennett, John M. Bennett, j4, Felino A. Soriano, Andrew Topel, Jürgen O. Olbrich & Andrew Topel, Jack Galmitz & Fotis Begetis, Joel Chace, Mark Melnicove, Sally Evans, James Sanders, Joe Balaz, John Martone, Raymond Farr, Carol Shillibeer, Carol Stetser, Natsuko Hirata, Cecelia Chapman and Jeff Crouch, Stuart Barnes, Michael Caylo-Baradi, Ric Carfagna, Nurul Wahidah, Anne Elvey, Jeff Harrison, Stephen Nelson, Cyriaco Lopes and Terri Witek, Daniel John Pilkington, Eryk Wenziak, SS Prasad, sean burn, Jonel Abellanosa, Michael O’Brien, Mark Pirie, Márton Koppány, Willie Smith, Kit Kennedy, Toby Finch, Naomi Buck Palagi, Marcello Diotallevi, Stu Hatton, Brendan Tang, John Pursch, Charles Freeland, Paul Pfleuger, Jr., Luc Fierens, Angad Arora, PT Davidson, Steven Alvarez, George J. Farrah, bruno neiva, Bob Heman, Richard Kostelanetz, Bogdan Puslenghea, hiromi suzuki, Tony Beyer, nick-e melville, Marilyn Stablein, Ria Masae, Susan Gangel, Michael Brandonisio, Katrinka Moore, Gian Luigi Braggio, Texas Fontanella, Aditya Bahl, Tom Snarsky, Trijita Mukherjee.

Friday, January 30, 2015

25 Edge Hill Poets: Martin Palmer



My time at Edge Hill: I'm very lucky to have been accepted at Edge Hill as their approach to Creative Writing is to keep you out of your comfort zone as much as possible, whilst offering the support needed to keep you going. I enrolled on the BA in 2009 hoping to learn how to write scripts, but a lot has changed since then. I started engaging more with poetry after an introduction to the works of Bob Cobbing in our third year 'Experimental Writing' module which, alongside an increased emphasis on our own poetics, helped me see areas I'd like to write in.

The Literature modules on the BA helped keep a strange sense of perspective on texts I'd encountered and ones I'd produced, yet enrollment on the MA in 2012 was for 'pure' Creative Writing without other 'distractions'. It soon became clear that this was very much another level, and, though I found it challenging, the supportive atmosphere was as strong as ever. Looking at postmodernism, learning about how we learn as writers from a more conceptual point of view and, as ever, a diverse range of mind-expanding texts all contributed to making me a less fearful writer at last - even, dare I say it, a bit more mature.

I know everyone says it, but it's true that there have been so many wonderful memories from my time at Edge Hill. All the visiting professionals, from the serious to the wacky, the readings at the Rose Theatre (now part of the new Arts Centre, of course), the different tutoring characters and styles (I've still not followed up the advice to get arrested for a night - I won't say who said that...). In short, I've enjoyed it so much, I've grown a lot and I wouldn't change any of it.

A little on the poetics: 'Conservative' is part of a group of poetry I call 'Deconstructivist'. These works, resembling exploded diagrams as one may find in an engineering manual, aim to probe language on a variety of levels - visual, sonic and associative - in the hope of finding out what language means to us and thereby expanding our awareness of our world. So many things in life are subjective experiences, whether it be religion, politics or sexuality as examples. Answers are there for us to try and find, or not as the case may be. Deconstructivism is an instinctual process and one that is open for everyone to try.


Martin blogs at  www.martinisblogtastic.blogspot.com and occasionally posts poetics. He is also re-blogging all of the 25 Edge Hill Poets posts and reflects on why here.

 
Details of the MA in Creative Writing at Edge Hill may be read here.

Tuesday, January 27, 2015

Robert Sheppard: Tim Atkins' and Peter Hughes' Petrarch versions compared


When I wrote my original comparison of Peter Hughes’ and Tim Atkins’ versions of Petrarch I had only a few scattered booklets to compare their developing projects. Poem 3 was selected almost at random, by being one of the few poems by both that I possessed. Read that comparison here. (Poem 3 then set me off on my own versions of that single poem, Harry Mathews or Nicholas Moore-like, of which there are 14 +, but none yet published, though one is here. Though I have performed them; see here and here for set lists, and comments on the nature of my versioning practice, including a blues version and a Jimmy Savile poem.)

Both of these long projects are now available whole.

See Tim Atkins’ Complete Petrarch here. Scroll down to find Crater 27.

See Peter Hughes Quite Frankly: After Petrarch’s Sonnets here.

I think we can safely say Tim’s book is the best Petrarch of 2014; Peter’s is the best of 2015! They are both brilliant reads cover-to-cover, but the experience of reading the books means I need to update my readings on the earlier post (although I don’t think I need to revise, as far as they went). Indeed, it was a surprise to find a reference to that post – its reading – in Jèssica Pujol i Duran’s excellent introduction to Atkins’ Complete Petrarch. Anyway here’s one update:

Jèssica Pujol i Duran notes, in her introduction to Atkins’ Collected Petrarch, that ‘We needn’t really read Petrarch for the differences between Petrarch and Atkins’, as I argue of Hughes’ work, ‘or indeed, their similarities’, she adds; ‘such concerns seem gleefully inessential’ for Atkins. (Pujol i Duran 2014: xii). She responds to an earlier web-post version of this chapter by concluding: ‘Thus we read Sheppard’s “distance”, aware that the measure of that distance is hallucinatory; that most of the time Atkins seems to be having a conversation with a neighbour, with a Zen master, or with “fucking-Jeffrey-fucking-Hilson”, rather than with the fourteenth-century Petrarch.’ (Pujol i Duran 2014: xii) [i] The identification of the Zen master is instructive, as we shall see.
As is clear, I think, these posts are dry-runs for the argument of a book in progress called (now) The Meaning of Form in Contemporary Innovative Poetry for which I have a contract (literally on the desk under my Hughes-Atkins chapter waiting to be signed and sent back to the publisher; read more here). (The other contemporaneous factor is that Tim will be reading for Storm and Golden Sky this Friday, which I am very excited about. (31/1/15: rightly so: a magnificent reading from the book.))

But I have also written general surveys of both projects, now we have them entire. Let them stand here as mini-reviews of both books.
Peter Hughes (b. 1956) has long been an admired independent voice in British poetry, avoiding groupings and affiliations, operating a prize-winning small-press, Oystercatcher, from the relative seclusion of North Norfolk, practising a writing that moves between various lyrical and sequential styles, but the sardonic and satirical tone in Quite Frankly: After Petrarch’s Sonnets (2015) is quite new. Hughes’ narrator seems a consistent ‘I’, Petrarch-like in his thwarted passions, but modernised: ‘drunk I scratch LaureTA on my arm/ with a Jocky Wilson lightweight dart’, (Hughes 2015:13) and is relocated to the Norfolk coast, where he lives in a fairground caravan: ‘you can understand why so many gods/ chose the middle east instead of Norfolk’. (Hughes 2013: 8) I can indeed. Having been at university in Norwich I know the bleakness of that coast. Throughout the 317 sonnets of Quite Frankly: After Petrarch’s Sonnets (the complete 2015 version), we repeatedly encounter a lover addicted to the eternal repetition of his sorrow and unrequited love (while using contemporary analogues, such as lines from pop songs, and plenty of humour) in the repeating form of the sonnet, with the continuing consolation of his pleading (even after Laura’s death). Into this relatively faithful transposition, Hughes weaves references to contemporary austerity Britain, that suggests that his Petrarch is one for our time, a time of generalized, lachrymose gloom. However, Petrarch’s concern for ‘justice & love’, denied by the hoodwinking of the poor in favour of a distant political establishment, arises enough times to bring us back to recognise Petrarch’s concerns, though they are cruelly stripped of theological consolation. (Hughes 2015: 342) 
Tim Atkins (b. 1962) is a lively presence in the London poetry scene, who also edits the online journal Onedit. Unlike Hughes, he is not striking a new tone or adopting a fresh voicing in his Petrarch poems – his Horace (2007) is almost a dry-run for their transformative methodology – but the sheer bulk and variety of this 2014 collection, Collected Petrarch, makes it his largest and most important volume to date. As Atkins creatively re-reads the canon of Canzoniere we are led into a distanciated body of work, where it is no longer the year 1327 but the time ‘13:27 - & there are still no demands to make love     in/ this sonnet   the author    function    soothed’. (Atkins 2011: poem 219) The poems seem to offer ‘an unending set of translations’ as Foucault’s concept of the textual author function (cleaved apart by caesura, mid-phrase) is ironically entertained only to be dismissed just short of half-past one in the afternoon – in an O’Hara-like or Berriganesque time-check – since O’\arasince sex will not be had in the castrating tradition of courtly love, but this is ultimately soothing to this pseudo-narrator, tortured as he is by human love. (Attridge 2004: 74) The restless registering of the contemporary world seems to confirm that its ten thousand things are indeed illusory as Buddhism suggests: ‘the woofing of dogs will not save me.’ (Atkins 2014: 437) The ‘Buddha life’ leaves ‘I … empty inside it’, (Atkins 2014: 537), yet the narrator (like Hughes’) cannot expunge the Petrarchan legacy: ‘Love – This is the notion which feeds and & informs me.’ (Atkins 2014: 445)
 (For Summaries and Weblinks on form, click here.) (Yes, I do know Frankie Boy is upside down!)

2017: My 'Petrarch 3' is now in print, see here and hereI have written in detail about the writing of Petrarch 3 (see https://robertsheppard.blogspot.com/2020/09/practice-led-piece-on-petrarch-3-from.html )

See three of my Petrarch 'Wyatts' here. And here
takes you to what came next:  Hap:Understudies of Thomas Wyatt’s Petrarch (though the first, introductory, poem ‘Perhaps a Mishap’ is not a version of Wyatt’s versions of Petrarch).

I write about the completed 100 sonnets (including my Petrarch ones) of The English Strain here
 


[i] My post ‘Robert Sheppard on the Petrarch Boys’, in which I raise the difference/distance distinction may be read at http://www.robertsheppard.blogspot.co.uk/2013/12/robert-sheppard-on-petrarch-boys-peter.html (accessed 27th January 2015).

Friday, January 23, 2015

25 Edge Hill Poets: Debbie Walsh

Nimbus Movements is published by Knives Forks and Spoons. See here. Debbie says of her work by way of poetics:

... 'The work I try to represent spans the invisible space between sensory response and syntactical elaboration. The tense, tone and meaning are often juxtaposed between space and silence – representing the place beyond words that cannot be felt fully or measured precisely'.

 

Insignia Drowning
 

Silence.

   The   felt before thought

Before dilution

          Before  a  simplification of words.

 

And love?

          A moist breath   fingering skin

And  You close, deep         perfect tense

            Imperative.

And   the door closes and closes

     again,

 tears ceaselessly               end .

   Memory is anaemic.

 

 The past           a scape

 a foliage of words         conceal

          transitive         heritable.

 

Now as clarity fades  dust

         imagination folds        recoils.

 

 






Remembrance
 
The smooth.

         The steel-stone box.

                Moments piled on moments.

 

I breathe                  dust of absence

            I well   at smiles

               at glances               held

                                              

                                    hands            held.

 

        Love              wrapped

 in smoke filled air

 

              bidden                

                    loss.

 

You               uniform framed.

               You             hollowed-out

tunnel-eyed   into              

 a restless symmetry

             of still  warm  ash

of flayed-flesh

of blacked-out screams.

           

 

 And this

           gathered  paradox

 

certain as a pulse

    your soft mouth    pressed

                 a corolla

                       a zephyr.

 

Explode  my heart

                 meet this rage

     this decayed regret     

                  come        alive  out of

         an

                    opening.

 Debbie Walsh was a student on the MA at Edge Hill, details here
.